Tuesday, September 29, 2020

A Stairway Through The Trees Comments

Rating: 5.0

At a huge beautiful park, I took a vivid scenic route,
On a stairway through hills, in lush nature's pursuit.
The tree lined path gleamed, in the early morning sun,
And pink clouds were fading, since day was now begun.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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Deluke Muwanigwa 29 September 2020

I guess i can make a start. Many times i get a lonesome feeling Try to read watch TV its not healing A take a stroll the pretty park Soul search till the evening is dark I meet my sister Evelyn Beuhler She seems also enthralled by the beauty Ok there is my bit....lets see where you take it.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 29 September 2020

Beautiful. Nothing like a lonesome stroll in the park to recreate the soul. Rhyming supreme. Next time we go together my sis....in a collabo choose a date and time

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 September 2020

A marvelous poem that captures the beauty of nature. Beautifully written with compelling imagery and great rhyme.

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Varsha M 29 September 2020

Very beautifully penned Evelyn...I like your this beautiful takes in all poetry. Splendid.

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