Saturday, March 21, 2009

A Stairs To Tenth - (Satire) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am going I am going
I am going I am going...
one step, two, three.... nine....
ground floor, first, second, third,
...
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Maria Barbara Korynt
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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 May 2009

Wonderfully penned, love it.10+

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Dagmara Anna 31 March 2009

In order to feel this satire, it is necessary well to understand this poem and... to read it in Polish. It is one, from your 'pearls'. Of course it is very good and in English, but 'taste' which is feeling in native language, it is a bit different, but it is understandable. This poem it is a way to have fun now. :))) DA

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Chitra - 22 March 2009

a breath taking or should I say a breath panting climb...highly descriptive and reminds me of so many things we experience while taking the next step of life..its these little things/episodes that keep us going

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 21 March 2009

Well done, Maria......A breath-panting poem.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 21 March 2009

Thoughts ruminating in one's mind when even climbing a normal stairs is like climbing the mount Everest.......hilarous write.10+++

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