A Square Deal Comments

every pakistani should have the same motivation. plus, every pakistani should admit what he is and decide what to do.

U got right, bro Bri Edward...'it' refers to Pakistan here...

Wonderful! How beautifully you started with an excusatory note, requested Pakistan not to believe your words uttered in despair, admitted the faults done from your end, ignoring the lawlessness and disorder prevailing everywhere highlighted the blessings u are enjoying because of it and at the end made a square deal and expressed your determination to do more for it, I am impressed :)

Inspirational and motivating poem..with great message for country. Loved it.... Thank you Shahzia for the beautiful comments for my poem...Breaking News..

you can be followed in your thoughts.my 10 for you :)

A very inspired write with a mix of patriotic ardour and a sense of frustration! Also a firm resolve to do everything possible to enhance the glory of your motherland that has given succour and sustenance, also a habitation and a name! !

it's written with great emotion and feeling! ! ! very thought-provoking as well as inspirational! ! :)

Right message! ! ! ........

It is virtually impossible not to, in many ways, warmly regard the land in which one is born. You more than do your beloved Pakistan justice, Shahzia. Excellent!

Hello Batool; I can see that you really appreciate your country. We all need to do more for the place in which we live. Whatever we do no matter how small it seems can make a difference in someones life. Good read.

I am reading this poem on the 4th of July, America's Independence day and I could not have picked a more proper time to read your strong words of how you need to do more for your country as we all need to honor our homeland. There is inspiration in your gifted writing style and words that amaze and teach me.

a thought provoking poem. this is what Pakistanis should be aware of. its not the land itself which is messy, its we who make it so.

A very nice verse..... patriotism at its best

What a nice poem it is, fantastic on a marvelous theme running like a horse in the race a bird is flying in the sky motionless…..the word is the music in the years and the fine tune Created in the poem…which makes the poem a master piece. Please read my poem ‘’I want to die’’

We should write with extra toil in response to our gifts this will be a square deal IF we think and IF we feel... Keep going, my friend!

Always follow your feelings. However, you have to find peace in your soul and then your surrounding will find it too. I came from Hungary, so I know what you mean.

be free to glory- wish to set freedom of own world-