Dedicated to Betty (My best friend)
She is not me
But she knows what i want to be
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its a very nice poem and very touchy too.i luv ur writing.
you're so lucky to have such a friend. Such friends are blessing to us :)
My type and my twin through unknown spirit Let me tell her that she is my hear............................ art of friendship as curved over stone of love as the color of pants riffles across heart of hearts, wonderful tribute to a friend unequaled blazing the glory of love, as when distance of love converges upon to a point of no return, yet impeccable by virtue, yet passionate to the point of extremity, wrought ingenious by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing
I loved the title dear......it should as such.....lucky you my dear to have found her...
true, real friends should be like that one soul in 2 bodies, well write dear
well, one of the best ode to a friend i have ever read. and again the talented young lady Luwi. u made not just a poem, but a work of art. impressed
yes! ! ! u said it..the concept of friendship..this is what i also feel about friendhsip..but failed to get it in long run of life...whomever thought as my twin turned out to be total stranger in this rat race world..i pray may ur betty stay with u forever nd prove herself that this poem deserves to be a dedication from u to her....but i fear 'TIME'! ! ! ! which proved most of the friends as a FAKE! ! ! well written thought..my heart felt congrats
With friendship like this it feels like heaven descends to earth and angels stand by us to share in divine love, it is also a bridge crossing the gap with those around you. May you live long and prosper while friendship guides and guards you! Huhaha ut Fryslan Boomfriend Ruerd
I really enjoyef this. You seem to have a great connection with your friend Betty. This is something that I have always found very hard to come by. I might have only trully felt that connection once. Always cherish your friendship it is one of the hardest things to find in life.
Habte, i so love this write... Its my first of yours and i wanna read you more... and more
this poem is of great value. you should be very lucky to have such a friend.
She sure seem so it hard to find tis kind of friend not ev'one have 1 treasure her n cherish her best wishes n love to u both
We are all divine twins separated by the illusive world but betty and you still have the divinity left between the two. Your words are simple but they have the divine halo, so they enter the heart stealthily to leave a lasting impression. Thanks a lot for sharing the poetry of the soul. CP
She is not me But she knows what i want to be She is not my twin But she got what I win yes heart knows everything and canbe called twins too....10
a beautiful explanation about your friend and how the friendship it should be...giving without waiting to take...very well written
Beautifully imagined. Nicely formed. Great work.