Saturday, July 4, 2009

A Spritual Twins Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dedicated to Betty (My best friend)

She is not me
But she knows what i want to be
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Luwi Habte
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Mubeen Sadhika 02 September 2009

Beautifully imagined. Nicely formed. Great work.

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Catrina Heart 27 July 2009

Lovely and touching piece! ! !

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its a very nice poem and very touchy too.i luv ur writing.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 19 July 2009

very touchy and thoughful eloquence............lovely! 10+

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Angel's lyre 19 July 2009

you're so lucky to have such a friend. Such friends are blessing to us :)

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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 July 2009

My type and my twin through unknown spirit Let me tell her that she is my hear............................ art of friendship as curved over stone of love as the color of pants riffles across heart of hearts, wonderful tribute to a friend unequaled blazing the glory of love, as when distance of love converges upon to a point of no return, yet impeccable by virtue, yet passionate to the point of extremity, wrought ingenious by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Malini Kadir 18 July 2009

I loved the title dear......it should as such.....lucky you my dear to have found her...

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Mohammed Albalushi 18 July 2009

true, real friends should be like that one soul in 2 bodies, well write dear

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Emma Adamyan 15 July 2009

well, one of the best ode to a friend i have ever read. and again the talented young lady Luwi. u made not just a poem, but a work of art. impressed

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Nazia Hamsakutty 15 July 2009

yes! ! ! u said it..the concept of friendship..this is what i also feel about friendhsip..but failed to get it in long run of life...whomever thought as my twin turned out to be total stranger in this rat race world..i pray may ur betty stay with u forever nd prove herself that this poem deserves to be a dedication from u to her....but i fear 'TIME'! ! ! ! which proved most of the friends as a FAKE! ! ! well written thought..my heart felt congrats

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Ruerd Visser 14 July 2009

With friendship like this it feels like heaven descends to earth and angels stand by us to share in divine love, it is also a bridge crossing the gap with those around you. May you live long and prosper while friendship guides and guards you! Huhaha ut Fryslan Boomfriend Ruerd

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Sam Edison 13 July 2009

I really enjoyef this. You seem to have a great connection with your friend Betty. This is something that I have always found very hard to come by. I might have only trully felt that connection once. Always cherish your friendship it is one of the hardest things to find in life.

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Mayse Codiers 13 July 2009

Habte, i so love this write... Its my first of yours and i wanna read you more... and more

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Indira Babbellapati 12 July 2009

your alter ego, i suppose...

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Angel's lyre 12 July 2009

this poem is of great value. you should be very lucky to have such a friend.

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J Lee 12 July 2009

She sure seem so it hard to find tis kind of friend not ev'one have 1 treasure her n cherish her best wishes n love to u both

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Not A Dream Choice 12 July 2009

really like it a lot, great rhyme

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C. P. Sharma 11 July 2009

We are all divine twins separated by the illusive world but betty and you still have the divinity left between the two. Your words are simple but they have the divine halo, so they enter the heart stealthily to leave a lasting impression. Thanks a lot for sharing the poetry of the soul. CP

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She is not me But she knows what i want to be She is not my twin But she got what I win yes heart knows everything and canbe called twins too....10

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a beautiful explanation about your friend and how the friendship it should be...giving without waiting to take...very well written

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