## A Spring Comments

The idea is so beautiful sir! the question leads to an inner calling! :)

A Spring is fresh is pure It bubbles out from deep within The hot magma core of life Boils and creating questions Fissures in the mind Rising thoughts so divine They come out as a Spring To slake and cool the soul's thirst. The pun on word Divine Does remind the divinity held within! A wonderful poem luring the spirit and soul skywards as always your thoughts never fail to amaze me! Angel

Great composition on a spring. Lovely idea is there.

good job in expressing views great one

After going through, it springs no surprise - it's a great write on a subject we ought to have owned and utilized but largely ignored to our utter disadvantage. well done.

I liked it -great job!

Samanyan, The spring is still there. But we are 'hollow man' without soul. So, it doesn't inspire. Very well penned. CP

Yes, divine thoughts alone will turn our soul into an eternal spring...you've used the word 'divine' effectively. A beautiful poem and urge.

Good Poem Thanks for sharing

Can life live without a soul? Good thoughts. Well written. Thanks for sharing with me

Yes we can all learn from nature, good poem

A brilliant exploration into the essence...of life! Excellent composition.

An inspiring poem and I am astonished how failed to read such poem....... well penned and moved gracefully....... my sincere thanks for your sharing......

so true, everything lies in the things which our forefathers leaves to learn....like what your poem melted the real righteousness of our ancestor......your a great poet, who unlock the meaning of Oneness to the source of Life thank you my friend...God bless..... A 10

“Sitting quietly, doing nothing, spring comes, and the grass grows by itself”- Zen proverb

great thoughts.......well penned

good thinking...good poetic conversion...10

To find the source of everything we must first look in and in silence it will come. Its from nature we learn to replicate her.

lovely piece. very lovely piece. I love me some spring, and I love me this piece.

A thoughtful write my friend, brings many questions to mind, great flowing word choice used give this a great crispness to it. A fine job sir 10