Tuesday, December 23, 2014

A Spring Carol Comments

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The hot summer how did make me forget,
Those buds in spring whose I not know,
Earth be staring at sun and I be finding a date,
To claim her with stares and kiss and bow,
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Saheb Mohapatra
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Geetha Jayakumar 07 January 2015

Beautiful Spring Carol poem Saheb. Loved reading it.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 24 December 2014

Nice nature poem composed so beautifully with wonderful lines......Saheb.....amazing write...10

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Salini Nair 23 December 2014

beautiful poem...like it

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Savita Tyagi 23 December 2014

Spring is enchanting filling us with joy. Every thing we look at is a testament pf blessing. Lovely poem. Excellent last two lines summing up beautifully. Enjoyed it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 December 2014

Spring carol is definitely an interesting poem. With true eyes you observe about blessings of Earth mother in spring that makes this poem special and really fabulous. Wonderful poem shared on.

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Saheb Mohapatra

Saheb Mohapatra

Odisha, India
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