! ! ! ! A Split And A Heart Break! ! ! ! Comments

Hats off...! ! ! I have no words to describe this poem...

Thoughtprovoking and pathetic. Try reading my Radhas. Thanks

Knowledge has limitations… why does the spirit Hover between moments of coherence, I wonder as I sit. Very poignant write...

A precious soul mate, who without giving reason, forsake, Could one turn so cruel, pay no heed to the heart break. Love is meant to nourish and nurture and bring rapture Here sat my cousin, with a soul in torment, fractured well written poem, touching..10/10

A deep poem with much emotion and a strong message 10+

Your poem has Keatsian touch in it. The underlying pathos moves the readers. Well phrased... and nice imagery. Get retired but not tired of life.

Wonderfully penned and profound as well.

emotional with wonderful images and good rhymes.

so full of emotion and u poured ur heart into this poem amazing

Out of such deep concern Born this poem Each line penetrates my heart Logic, magic.. nothing can work At times when destiny sets its toll. Emotional... yet profound in its theme. Repeatedly read to get into its core. Thank you dear poet.

''No one heard any sound of a cry, as tears had dried. But is it humanly possible to forever hide behind a lie. At times it seems there is a smile and a light on the face. Giving a glimpse of what once was… illusion, no trace.'' The most beautiful and heart-felt poem I read this evening. Regards Naseer

It would be impossible to read this poem and remain untouched. Your compassion for this dear soul is apparent in every line. Your last lines are especially beautiful. Take care. Love, SandraX

A life of promise, gone waste... today at sixty, ravage of time in and out of asylums, before spring manifest...autumn arrive..............most poignant and heart breaking, well penned,10++, thanks for sharing

heart felt feelings well written with faith

Really I felt the sad tune and have no words to write in pure way. I cannot offer marks or quotes for your poem. A priceless theme.

Mamata your poem made me cryyyyyyy thanks for sharing -10 anjali

Poignant piece Mamta, written from your loving heart, 10 Lynda xx

The last para concludes the poem very effectively - touching the heart! 10! -Raj Nandy

deep sentiments poetic...free flow of words right out of heart...moving write...10

pain...pain...pain... let me dissolve into it...............