With colours, a splendid world that does lush,
Bright and romantic that has blush.
There the dove-like spring of love does gush
With purity truly divine and hush.
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you got the most splendid poem.... a simple, yet inspiring line to the Reader who want to find solitudes in life.....thank you and God bless a 10 +
You describes the splendor of the world with striking images with a fresh perception...and the rhythm of the end rhymes sound out on every line of this lovely poem. Suurly a 10
The trees grow in abundance that does flush The soul clean in a mild way that did rush. it so wonderfull and good poem with deep thoughs init...
you paint vivid and clear imagery with your poetic thoughts.... I enjoyed! J. L.
The splendid monorhymes.................................a good write..............
With purity truly divine and hush. The trees grow in abundance that does flush.....................wonderful exposition nature scintillating that blazes the glory of beauty, eloquent write,10++, thanks for sharing
so rhythmically and it is filled with anticipating of nature... very inspired poetry
Wow! Obinna you have used the same rhyme for every sentence. This is not easy, and is commendable, as you kept to the theme of a Splendid World. Great work. 10 Karin Anderson
You have created a wonderful atmosphere, a 'divine' and 'mild' one! We've enjoyed the images across such artistic rhyming. Thanks for sharing.