Sun beams
Reflect through
Cotton wool like remnants
Of departing clouds
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beautiful images here Sameer, well composed verse...interesting to read. thank you.
Brings back lovely memories of the younger years. The early morning rains and the little creatures around. Great Write.
Here, the rain has brought you some evergreen memories. Good. In my case also, rain is also a strong a element and so can easily absorb your poem. Good verses.
the poetry... it's picturesque... it talks to you... it's humble... and yet you have so much expertise with the language... i'm so glad i got to read this...
Enjoy your imagery here. Nice write. Thanks for sharing with me
Nice write! I love nature and nature poets! Naturally I love you! Congrats!
Nature boy, are ya? This one is movin in some ways that only nature poeple would understand. On the whole, nice goin on the out-door imagery.
ohhh friend! ! this is a joyful read indeed...great one for the sore battered and shattered heart... thanks for this one, enjoyed it very much 10++ regards shan
yap...really joyful....the splash has fourteen hues..much more than that of the rainbow
nice poem if u like going out side but i stay in my home nice and some what happy
Great! I am new in poem but i am impressed your beautiful poem..Really perfect..i hope i will be a perfect poet as you..please read my poems..i wonder your comments...
Fresh is your poem Refreshing the drizzle Youthful spirit Childhood memories Never to be forgotten Thanks, Sameer, For giving us a glimpse Into our forgotten Childhood days! Angel
Metaphorical genius. It's very thoughtful and structured brilliantly. Beautiful
o whatta nice piece dear little one..this is a great poem ha..and the proof is..it is included in top 500..naizz
oh you really amazed me you get 10 out of 10 for this poem i wish all the best your sincerly tega.a
It is very true in life, but also makes you look at many other points and views in it.