Saturday, June 6, 2009

A Splash Of Joyful Memories Comments

Rating: 4.7

Sun beams
Reflect through
Cotton wool like remnants
Of departing clouds
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Sameer Ahmed
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Marla Smith 11 July 2009

It is very true in life, but also makes you look at many other points and views in it.

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Sicelo Sithole 03 July 2009

beautiful images here Sameer, well composed verse...interesting to read. thank you.

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Ted M 27 June 2009

Brings back lovely memories of the younger years. The early morning rains and the little creatures around. Great Write.

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Ravi A 23 June 2009

Here, the rain has brought you some evergreen memories. Good. In my case also, rain is also a strong a element and so can easily absorb your poem. Good verses.

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Aamnah Akhtar 22 June 2009

the poetry... it's picturesque... it talks to you... it's humble... and yet you have so much expertise with the language... i'm so glad i got to read this...

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Ravi Sathasivam 21 June 2009

Enjoy your imagery here. Nice write. Thanks for sharing with me

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Subbaraman N V 19 June 2009

Nice write! I love nature and nature poets! Naturally I love you! Congrats!

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Jack Tex 19 June 2009

Nature boy, are ya? This one is movin in some ways that only nature poeple would understand. On the whole, nice goin on the out-door imagery.

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Debra Joseph 18 June 2009

A lovely poem Sameer! Really very well expressed.

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 June 2009

ohhh friend! ! this is a joyful read indeed...great one for the sore battered and shattered heart... thanks for this one, enjoyed it very much 10++ regards shan

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Ying Escalona 15 June 2009

yap...really joyful....the splash has fourteen hues..much more than that of the rainbow

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Emily Core 14 June 2009

nice poem if u like going out side but i stay in my home nice and some what happy

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Dilek AvþAr 13 June 2009

Great! I am new in poem but i am impressed your beautiful poem..Really perfect..i hope i will be a perfect poet as you..please read my poems..i wonder your comments...

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Pandian Angelina 13 June 2009

Fresh is your poem Refreshing the drizzle Youthful spirit Childhood memories Never to be forgotten Thanks, Sameer, For giving us a glimpse Into our forgotten Childhood days! Angel

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 13 June 2009

Metaphorical genius. It's very thoughtful and structured brilliantly. Beautiful

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Winnie Angel 12 June 2009

lovely write! ....keep it up! ..

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Jerry Abrahamson 12 June 2009

Another nice poem. Keep going.

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Naidz Ladia 12 June 2009

o whatta nice piece dear little one..this is a great poem ha..and the proof is..it is included in top 500..naizz

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Tega Akpoduado 12 June 2009

oh you really amazed me you get 10 out of 10 for this poem i wish all the best your sincerly tega.a

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Samantha Chapman 12 June 2009

beauitful imagery and sentiment.

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