Monday, November 10, 2008

A Spirited Soul. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shaking a fist at what wishes her harm
Calmly facing her fears of troubled alarm,
She fishes, heart deep, when a drama,
Which threatens to flood her with tears,
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Fay Slimm
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Robert Howard 28 November 2008

I love the near, and actual rhyming. It seems to convey a simultaneous nod to tradition and rebellion against it. How independent of you!

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Rebel Heart 11 November 2008

A poem with a strong rhythm and rhyme that reinforces the character of this spirited soul with a generous heart...lovely poem Fay. j x

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Kris Smith 10 November 2008

The golden nib strikes again you make a lot of sense for a whippersnapper perhaps the world is in good hands, poetry is 10 Chris

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Billy Joe Collins 10 November 2008

spiritual growth is so much needed thank you for sharing

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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