A Spirit Uncloaked Comments
Was it somewhere in my early youth
That my heart disclosed this later truth?
When-where-with whom I belong,
Shadows-show me how I went wrong!
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I, too, have sinned, I, too, have burned! This is the afterward-soul discerned, When conscience does a flame ignite And reduce to ash Our acts of plight! Behind a cloud of smoke, I leave now, a spirit uncloaked! ... your confession shows ur simplicity and serenity and tranquility of your mind and heart. great poem. I allot 10++++++++++++++++
And hear this message as muted as thunder...Oh Romeo, your poem is the work of a free man. I see by your bio that you have also lived through many trials.
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11/21/2025 11:15:36 AM # 1.0.0
Outstanding! wonderful imagery! last stanza is my favorite really nohing more for me to say... completely speechless!