Friday, May 9, 2014

A Spirit's Cry Comments

Rating: 5.0

On what to live when Love is leaving? —
On memories, to feed the reminiscence?
In silent desperation dreaming of a dream,
Deaf I have become to my bosom's scream:
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 November 2017

If love leaves mind fees sorrow. If love holds a person feels goodness. Feeling love with emotion matters a lot. Embracing Godl's love. This we have to explore. An interesting poem is nicely penned.10

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Daniel Brick 19 December 2014

This poem is certainly an interior monologue but it's cast as a dialogue between the lost soul lamenting a failed love and what appears to be a wise compassionate listener. The first thing that struck me is the passionate nature of the central character. The emotions that were directed to her lover are still roiling inside of her, but they have no object. This convinces me of her worthiness to receive love if indeed it is a gift from an outside force. And the other person's confidence she will love again is confirmed by either the the persistence of her passionate nature or the blessing of that outside force. She is either creating her fate out of her pure devotion to love or makng herself ready to receive it as a gift.

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