Monday, November 10, 2008

A Spiral Moments Of Stolen Ecstasy Comments

Rating: 4.8

Let me bring you thoughts from the clouds
Fly with me,
Visit the realm of reveries
Let ourselves be lost
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Julian Salvacion
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Estrella Baldemosa 05 December 2008

I am in awe! hypnotized by the words it draws me through the clouds spiralling into the labyrinth of fantasy that even the prying eyes could not follow! :) love it!

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 11 November 2008

Lovers journey through the coil of pleasure! Again through the elements! But why........ we sink in an altitude of confusion! and Hush now! For what was due has been done, is enigmatic! But at last......... will guard you...gives some assurance! How the cultural differences between countries colors the variety of interpretations A sweet, sensual and romatic poem! Keep on.......Julian.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 11 November 2008

Oh! Dear Hold tight we would travel on wings of ectasy, Hold tight We would trespass on the realm of fantasy. Good images and ideas.

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Mifael Llauderes 10 November 2008

nice flow of words and thoughts, easy to follow... this one stirs the senses...

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Drake Kinkaid 10 November 2008

I really enjoy this You seem to have the right type of thinking

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Kallie Madison 10 November 2008

your poem is great and i think your a great poet..best of luck

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Joseph Poewhit 10 November 2008

Poem reads with estatic feelings being vented

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Shruti Suresh 10 November 2008

all your poems have magic around them.. like tin sparkles getting bigger and bigger and lift you off your feet. Good job..

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C T Heart 10 November 2008

such a great start to write...keep on penning you are doing a great job... a10.

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Ency Bearis 10 November 2008

a wonderful poem...nice to read...lovely...A10 Ency Bearis

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