Let me bring you thoughts from the clouds
Fly with me,
Visit the realm of reveries
Let ourselves be lost
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Lovers journey through the coil of pleasure! Again through the elements! But why........ we sink in an altitude of confusion! and Hush now! For what was due has been done, is enigmatic! But at last......... will guard you...gives some assurance! How the cultural differences between countries colors the variety of interpretations A sweet, sensual and romatic poem! Keep on.......Julian.
Oh! Dear Hold tight we would travel on wings of ectasy, Hold tight We would trespass on the realm of fantasy. Good images and ideas.
nice flow of words and thoughts, easy to follow... this one stirs the senses...
I really enjoy this You seem to have the right type of thinking
your poem is great and i think your a great poet..best of luck
all your poems have magic around them.. like tin sparkles getting bigger and bigger and lift you off your feet. Good job..
such a great start to write...keep on penning you are doing a great job... a10.
I am in awe! hypnotized by the words it draws me through the clouds spiralling into the labyrinth of fantasy that even the prying eyes could not follow! :) love it!