! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Spinning Top- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

It whirs, whirs and then slows down, Rachel Ann Butler

mamta, after reading it two times, my mind could equate it with humans. See, from the momemt of birth onwards, we continue spinning, making various voices/noises till we btreathe our last and lie down quietly n motionless.... a nice simily with the spinning top, i would say.....

Doctrines of yester years If anyone says… still relevant Then see how it spins… And at last….

Very mesmerizing while it lasts. Something very poignant about this one.10, for the depth of your feelings. Warm wishes, Sandra

life...very symbolic...thanks...10

a fascinating game we have...