Monday, November 27, 2006

A Spineless Reptile Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am still feverish from the venom of your sting
The poison still runs in my veins
I’m too weak to fight it
It makes me want to lash out at you
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Ghada Shahbender
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Great metaphorical write. Hits the bulls eye… wonderful

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Kee Thampi 30 November 2006

The poison still runs in my veins I’m too weak to fight it It makes me want to lash out at you It makes me want to hurt you as you did me the inebriate of love of snakes and its toxicity still pasess in our culture of war and fights, it really with our blood we are really like snakes, this poet makes in verses The poison still runs in my veins I’m too weak I love this writes and keep it with my lovable poem.........

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Brian Dorn 27 November 2006

Nice use of metaphors, Ghada... well worded and blunt. Good write! Brian

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Brian Dorn 27 November 2006

Nice use of metaphors, Ghada... well worded and blunt. Good write! Brian

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Tracey Collins 27 November 2006

not a bad rite if u lie snakes, and let them go curl up in their hole....

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Ghada Shahbender

Ghada Shahbender

Cairo, Egypt
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