Friday, April 12, 2019

A Spider Seamed Comments

Rating: 5.0

A spider seamed
beneath springs moon
its spirals gleamed
in midnights bloom
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Kevin Patrick
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 April 2019

Beneath spring's moon a spider seamed and midnight bloomed with great interest. Strong will power grows with synthesis of mind. An excellent poem is brilliantly penned.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 April 2019

Great imagination on a glui thing like spider. The last stanza winds it well.

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Valsa George 12 April 2019

Beautiful imagination, Kevin! 'A textured synthesis/ of melodic calligraphy'! Wonderful expression!

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