Thursday, October 4, 2018

A Spider City Comments

Rating: 5.0

I created a spider city
By letting spiders spin their webs
Outside my second-floor window
In the shade of dusk to dawn light.
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NHIEN NGUYEN MD
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Nhien Nguyen 11 October 2018

Thanks for visiting and your comments. Nhien

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Ellen Venier 10 October 2018

Well thought out but whimsical poem. It's fun to read! I especially liked the line from small huts in city outskirts to big castle of a queen's court. Describes resilience and determination and a sense of unity when it comes to rebuilding. Nicely done!

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