Thursday, September 13, 2018

A Spell Is Cast Across The Rising Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

I took an oath that binds me to the sea;
I left behind all claims, all history,
bundled with my fears I carry them no more
from not the throat but from the plexus roar.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2018

It is a beautiful rhymical poem on journey and nature having stunning expression and nice collocation. I quote.... the sun has set the world a golden hue a spell is cast across the rising moon, in her glow I rest in magic sleep, the skies are charged, the world is in retreat. Thanks for sharing.10

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Mihaela Pirjol 14 September 2018

I lovely, melancholic couplet rhymed poem, evoking that old-fashioned way of writing poetry! Absolutely wonderful!

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