Friday, June 16, 2006

A Spectramatic Perception Comments

Rating: 4.5

All is dark, no choice exists
Start a spark, creating bliss
Run its light, from that to this
Perimeter, created bliss
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Paul Moosberg
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Mary Nagy 12 September 2006

Many of your poems leave my head spinning. Truly Paul, the most interesting and unique writing I've seen in so long. Great work. sincerely, Mary

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Will Barber 19 June 2006

If you had any doubt that you are a genius, reread this poem. I fear you may be the reincarnation of William Blake. Just speculation, but the poem would have been claimed proudly by that visionary.

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