You are my creator
My mentor, my teacher,
You are the guiding force of my life
Who always help me in times of strife.
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Beautiful beautiful. Made a revisit today and enjoyed it more
A wonderful poem on special relationship. Loved your lucid expression....5 stars
what nice more words can be like this to a mentor and especially. a mother.! ! thank you for sharingpoet.! ! - Siddartha! !
Wonderful poem.... Mom, you are the epitome of my existence The reason for my subsistence, Howsoever I describe you, I know my words will always fall short As a mom-child relationship is of that special so...
Nature teaches a lot! And, we have to thank the Creator always. Nice work.
Lovely! indeed mother - is the closest image one may compare with God!
A great tribute in the poem to the revered mother and a great poem.
Nobody can do anything more than a mother, whoevr he or she be! A very heart-touching poem..Good!
Lovely just lovely.........lines for one Mother.....Keep it up! ! ! !
A lovely penning where you kept the lovely mom above all. Very truly I also agree her to be above any God. She is the most nearest to me Who nurtured and fed me through that cord. She knotted me so endearingly with that umbilical cord ! ! !
Yes, as you rightly say, mother is the God's representative on earth. A beautiful poem. Enjoyed.
How totally beautiful! This poem is a wonderful tribute to your Mom and mothers everywhere! Everything you have written can be said of everyone's mom, she is the one who will always share our hearts no matter what! I absolutely love this poem. My mom is gone, but you have described her as well. Thank you. RoseAnn
though we can never reciprocate what moms do for us, can't think even, but the way you have covered all the aspects of her personality is so innocent and superbly rendered poetically...Kavya i love this poem!
What a beautiful poem U, straight from the heart! Blessings!