Saturday, September 17, 2011

A Special Person Comments

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You ask me what is troubling me
what do I keep thinking always.
Just what the future hold for you and me
that's what occupies my mind most days.
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Renu Kakkar
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Renu Kakkar 26 September 2011

thank you...i wrote this recently..a sweet poem...

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Enyinwa Okechukwu Enyinwa 19 September 2011

I love this line '''(It was inevitable though I should have been aware you are such a considerate person dear and true. It happened all of a sudden when I was unaware could not help myself and fell in love with you.) Full of meanings, what a great job with this he will show more love...

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Renu Kakkar 18 September 2011

thanks, for liking the poem

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Jo George 18 September 2011

Wonderful expression, excellent narration.well done

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Renu Kakkar

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Fazilka, punjab
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