Monday, April 27, 2009

A Special Occasion Comments

Rating: 5.0

While observing the gathering guest
and remembering eleven years past, when
She made her first debut on the world stage.
Wearing a soft juicy peach birth-day dress;
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 June 2010

‘Grandma watches in delight-‘ it is bottomline of poetry…because joyous wheeling back always tickling nostalgia …vicarious delight Grandma may be subconsciously regurgitating… Thanks Ma’am for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Claude H Oliver Ii 27 November 2009

Beautiful poetic picture of a most special occasion.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2009

Down the aisle she strolls Adorning a pale blue gown That flails around her ankle. Her radiance and beauty unparallel others Grandma just stares at the Junior Debutante..envisioning and recollecting the past is something one longs inthe life...beautiful theme....10 read mine.............innocence regained....

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rago rago 27 April 2009

really a fantastic poem visualizing the past 2006.........recaptivating down the memoirs............

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