Friday, May 15, 2009

A Special Gift Called Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is a special gift,
Something you must be swift
To take care as you shift
Your focus to uplift
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
COMMENTS
Eyan Desir 17 November 2009

Well expressed.......................

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Bushra Hussaini 07 November 2009

simple, short but very creative! ! !

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 02 October 2009

I voted +10 for this poem!

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Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 24 September 2009

a beauiful wise poem..so well penned

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 September 2009

Lovely and expressive. Keep writing!

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Kuji Soliman 07 September 2009

very very very very nice :) i loved it and i showed it to my friends too :)

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Will Barber 14 August 2009

Wonderful rhyme shift, and an inspiring message.

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Do so that life be fit And be heavenly lit, For with that kind to hit To put sunlight in it. o, lord gift us it with joy and happiness....10 read mine o, lord, , , prayer...prayer for friend...music band

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Broken Heart 17 July 2009

nyc poem! ! nycly writen! 10 again! ! : D

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Raj Nandy 15 July 2009

LIFE INDEED IS A GIFT! YET PEOPLE TAKE IT FOR GRANTED! ONCE WE REALISE THIS, THEN OUR FOCUS WOULD ALSO CHANGE! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Lynda Robson 07 July 2009

Life is a special gift to cherish and make the most of, a very enjoyable read, thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Jack Price 15 June 2009

I love your style Obinna, these are feel good poems and they are little shots of inspiration! great message. 10+ for me.... J. L.

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Howard Kern 14 June 2009

A well executed drive thru life. that is presious

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Jasbir Chatterjee 29 May 2009

Life is, indeed, a special gift to be cherished, to take care, as you say in the poem. No one knows for sure what happens to us after we die; so Make hay while the sun shines, as the cliche goes.

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Kesav Easwaran 29 May 2009

A sunlight poem about life...short yet rythmic natural rhyming lines...good work, Obinna...10

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Shashendra Amalshan 27 May 2009

I tell you what sir, your poem is full of life, soo cool, i wish life will give me gifts in the years to come, priceless ones i mean 10+++

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Sandra Fowler 24 May 2009

Each new day is indeed a gift and well worth living. May you see more sunshine than shadows from your own personal window on the world. Thank you for your lovely comments. Warm regards, Sandra

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Meggie Gultiano 23 May 2009

this is a nice write...

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Sandra Martyres 22 May 2009

Nice rhyming OKE, good piece...

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