Life is a special gift,
Something you must be swift
To take care as you shift
Your focus to uplift
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very very very very nice :) i loved it and i showed it to my friends too :)
Do so that life be fit And be heavenly lit, For with that kind to hit To put sunlight in it. o, lord gift us it with joy and happiness....10 read mine o, lord, , , prayer...prayer for friend...music band
LIFE INDEED IS A GIFT! YET PEOPLE TAKE IT FOR GRANTED! ONCE WE REALISE THIS, THEN OUR FOCUS WOULD ALSO CHANGE! 10! -Raj Nandy
Life is a special gift to cherish and make the most of, a very enjoyable read, thanks 10 Lynda xx
I love your style Obinna, these are feel good poems and they are little shots of inspiration! great message. 10+ for me.... J. L.
Life is, indeed, a special gift to be cherished, to take care, as you say in the poem. No one knows for sure what happens to us after we die; so Make hay while the sun shines, as the cliche goes.
A sunlight poem about life...short yet rythmic natural rhyming lines...good work, Obinna...10
I tell you what sir, your poem is full of life, soo cool, i wish life will give me gifts in the years to come, priceless ones i mean 10+++
Each new day is indeed a gift and well worth living. May you see more sunshine than shadows from your own personal window on the world. Thank you for your lovely comments. Warm regards, Sandra
Well expressed.......................