Thursday, May 13, 2010

A Special Friend Named Shanel Comments

Rating: 4.3

This is dedicated to a friend, who is very close and special to me,

Shanel kamara
You are my friend, my sister and best peer that is true,
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Mohammad Muzzammil 17 January 2011

Your poem has expressed your deep love and affection for your lovely friend. I think, as you have presented, your friend must be the best friend and nice fellow in the world.

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Iron Panda 23™ 02 June 2010

ur bestest friend is lucky to have u^-^

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Bethacca Bigelly 28 May 2010

i wish i had a friend like that to trust as you do. it's an amazing poem

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Emily Prescott 27 May 2010

You have described the true meaning of friendship incredibly well!

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Dr. Eva L. Shaw 25 May 2010

Wow! I would like to be your friend....it sounds to me like you have found the one true treasure in life!

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Dr. Eva L. Shaw 25 May 2010

Wow! I would like to be your friend....it sounds to me like you have found the one true treasure in life!

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Afzal Shauq 25 May 2010

a lovely tribute to friend and a meaningful poem..rich idea..10/10

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Nathan Gibbons 25 May 2010

i liked the poem...good combination of simplicity and thankfullness

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your poems have meaning...i like them, but you should try putting some sort of rythme with it. instead of long sentences. use small short and brief sentences. allow your readers to make of it what they want. your poems are great. i just believe they could be better. you have potential you just have to exert it to the right areas in your poems.

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