Friday, October 2, 2009

. A Special Flower....♥ ..............(Love) Comments

Rating: 3.4

Every once in a while
The beholder casts
A special wish
And a flower is created
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Eyan Desir
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Vandavasu Vittal 04 March 2010

I witnessed the rain of moments That provoked me to think again in mystic houses we are tenants Willingly or unwillingly, love is slain Education has thought us everything, Everything but love, The tune divine to sing, Reaching from above. Bearing love with care Actually forsaking it gently Making love so bare Fictionally picturing it bluntly As flowers bloom It seems soon Love will prevail Undoing the wail

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Ihab Marzouk 05 November 2009

As I suppose, you are so much great at using the suitable words while writing. I have considered the flower as a person that I began to have feelings for and it was a strange sensibility that occured in the deaper place in my heart. I do thank you very well. I promised myself I would, if God permits it, read a poem in a day. I'm here. I'm honoured if you want to have a conversation.

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Ihab Marzouk 05 November 2009

As I suppose, you are so much great at using the suitable words while writing. I have considered the flower as a person that I began to have feelings for and it was a strange sensibility that occured in the deaper place in my heart. I do thank you very well.

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Ben Gieske 31 October 2009

I love flowers too and they can bring us great joy. I hope that you have a whole garden of flowers. Their blossoms don't last too long. Perhaps the thought will linger even though the blossom fades away or a poem such as yours is left in their place.

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 16 October 2009

A special flower of a poem, indeed! Thanks to the poet for this beautiful, lovely piece!

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Nathan Barkley 16 October 2009

Beautiful, excellent loved every word

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 October 2009

For every time eyes see This flower blossom It's a miracle and privilege To be in its presents..............it is lovely to be in its presents and eyes tryto see it blossom... lovely creation and i loved it.....10 read mine...plege....should we die....no where to go...beauty

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Nalathai Vongjalorn 12 October 2009

Love the poem! ! ! it deserves a 10+

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Cecilia Nicoletti 10 October 2009

beautiful and delicate poem. you are inspired. keep like this.

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Cecilia Nicoletti 10 October 2009

beautiful and delicate poem. you are inspired. keep like this.

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Emily Torres 09 October 2009

what a lucky girl to be that flower. great work.10++++++++++++++++

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Pitilosi Mdala 09 October 2009

One special wish. Be hold a flower is created this is true.10 out of 10

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Marieta Maglas 09 October 2009

wonderful visual metaphor: ''For every time I appreciate living I remember you are that special flower'' excellent symbolistic poem, lovely to read.....10+++++++++

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Corey Threet 09 October 2009

Wow beautiful poem really heartfelt and thoughtful. Really nice thanks for sharing and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! !

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Saadat Tahir 09 October 2009

love dr... u v done a very nice poem...charming fresh well done cheers

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Philip Alarie 08 October 2009

Very beautiful poem! Keep up the great writing! :)

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Poetic Soul 08 October 2009

A well penned write, caputures the essence of the inner beauty.

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Kirsty Kirkham 08 October 2009

hi, its ok i havnt read your others yet, but i will later on tomorrow and give you my opinion then, i like to read them all first and then give a comment if that is ok with you, and maybe you can read afew of mine when i post them and tell me your thoughts x

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Terence Nabbs 08 October 2009

dear eyan very nice poem in fact blooming lovely

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Vance Creston 08 October 2009

Great read, it captured the essence of a flower's inner beauty.

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