Sunday, January 17, 2010

A Special Day Comments

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The Sun was smiling
The Stars were twinkling and staring
The Moon was laughing
Candles flamed gold
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Abdullah Musa
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samkelisiwe makhubu 02 March 2018

wow; this poem is so amazing, i really bet that u have a great talent i am from memel primary school, g7.mr du toit school.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 06 February 2012

Simple brilliant man, beautiful poem my friend.

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Danielle Ducote 30 January 2010

Beautifully Written. U have so much emotion in your writing.. I loved it..

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Beka ? ? ? 21 January 2010

nice it was shiny =)

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Mae Bonnin 21 January 2010

I like this alot. You bring out many aspects of a special day of going to heaven. You have a good grasp on this idea and vision. This is a lovely and remarkable poem. Any feedback on my poems will be appreciated as well.

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Chase Breeden 21 January 2010

I understand he emotion in this poem very well. It's an intriguing poem. Leave me some feedback on a few of mine if you will. Thanks

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The Lost.. 18 January 2010

this is very nice Abdulla..keep writing and hope u the best in ur life.

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