The Sun was smiling
The Stars were twinkling and staring
The Moon was laughing
Candles flamed gold
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Beautifully Written. U have so much emotion in your writing.. I loved it..
I like this alot. You bring out many aspects of a special day of going to heaven. You have a good grasp on this idea and vision. This is a lovely and remarkable poem. Any feedback on my poems will be appreciated as well.
I understand he emotion in this poem very well. It's an intriguing poem. Leave me some feedback on a few of mine if you will. Thanks
this is very nice Abdulla..keep writing and hope u the best in ur life.
wow; this poem is so amazing, i really bet that u have a great talent i am from memel primary school, g7.mr du toit school.