Sunday, December 12, 2010

A Special Christmas Gift Comments

Rating: 2.9

Most gifts come wrapped or maybe
Too awkward to be,
Are left standing in the corner or lying unwrapped under the tree
But this special gift was different, to be delivered on bended knee.
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Sidi Mahtrow
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 21 November 2014

Hello poet Sidi I have been away form PH for a while. I enjoyed this poem and think it was about someone getting their feet all taken care of. It sounds like a tribute poem as well. It's great to write about family and capture these memories. I enjoyed, Loyd.

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Jim Troy 11 August 2011

I came back to add this one to my list of favorites.......Thanks..... Jim Troy

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Jim Troy 09 July 2011

I just love the Christmas Gift poem.... was hanging on to every word and wondered what it was going to be.... And at last, 'Wow' what a gift.... Thank you for sharing your fine gifts of poetry with all of us..... Jim Troy

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Saadat Tahir 20 December 2010

very compellingly family centric, and a breath of fresh air it seems from the turbines of a time machine, whirring away some where afar... nice composition well done cheers

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