Sun peeps in the horizon
After waging a night-long war
Against the fearful gloom
Sun moves slowly and slowly
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Great imagery. You give a heart-warming picture of the day n night that make up life. The smooth transition from day to night n vice versa has a lot to teach to the mind that thinks. A big 10.
Moon disappears wearing invisible mask and lovers become busy. Amazing imagery is wisely drawn in this poem basing on perception of moon.10
Lovers soar in the sky in dim moon lit light..lovely poem