Sunday, December 3, 2017

A Special Boon Comments

Rating: 4.8

Sun peeps in the horizon
After waging a night-long war
Against the fearful gloom
Sun moves slowly and slowly
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shakil ahmed
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Rini Shibu 10 December 2017

Lovers soar in the sky in dim moon lit light..lovely poem

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Nosheen Irfan 10 December 2017

Great imagery. You give a heart-warming picture of the day n night that make up life. The smooth transition from day to night n vice versa has a lot to teach to the mind that thinks. A big 10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 December 2017

Moon disappears wearing invisible mask and lovers become busy. Amazing imagery is wisely drawn in this poem basing on perception of moon.10

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Shakil Ahmed 03 December 2017

thanks for you nice comment.

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Badarpur, Assam, India.
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