Sunday, May 13, 2012

A Sparrow's Thoughts... (Number Eight) Comments

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'steady rain, black dirt,
birds singing, to the clouds.
streets wet, cars passing,
time turns inward, so do i...'
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Eric Cockrell
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Dave Walker 14 May 2012

A great ending to a great series of poem.

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Beautifully done! Great poem. You've said it all! Thanks. Elizabeth

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Eric Cockrell 13 May 2012

the end of this series of thought poems... may your hearts find peace!

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