Friday, September 15, 2017

A Sparrow Comments

Rating: 4.5

Once a sparrow came to me, asked me if I was happy with the life I live………..
Yes I am happy with my life I replied, Its beautiful if you view with a positive side….
Wait, I said her, listen to the sound of pleasing wind, no she replied with her waging tail… It makes me remind how I failed…with tears in her eyes I came to know, It was her loved ones she lost with the windy show…
Oh my dear please don't fear… don't stall I will help you in whatever you desire… blinking her eyes she smiled at me, started singing song explaining me how she lived…
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Bhagyashree Gunjikar (Naik)
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Jazib Kamalvi 21 October 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Bhagyashree. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Bhagyashree Naik 12 November 2017

Thank you soo much...

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