Wednesday, March 15, 2017

A Sparrow Comments

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A sparrow sitting
at the bar of my door,
is finding solace on shade,
from the deadly heat she abhors.
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sarwesh tiwari
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Sarwesh Tiwari 29 March 2017

Thank you@Doctor crazy for reading and enjoying my poems.

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Sarwesh Tiwari 29 March 2017

Thank you@Rajnish..your comment is so lovely..and your observation is great..:-)

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Rajnish Manga 29 March 2017

A have enjoyed reading this cute poem due to its simplicity and the poet's love and passion for nature of which sparrows are a small yet extremely significant part. Thanks for sharing: ]]] A sparrow .... Singing melodies .... without caring for service or reward.

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Doctor Crazy 28 March 2017

Love the depth, awesome! !

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Sarwesh Tiwari 15 March 2017

Thank you Edward...thanks for appreciating..

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Sarwesh Tiwari 15 March 2017

Thank you robert...it seems we are on same spritual plane...

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 March 2017

Solace on shade! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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