Friday, June 13, 2008

A Sparkle In Nightingale's Heart Comments

Rating: 4.8

I live in the warmest corner of her heart
I burn turn to ashes
My ashes mix in the rose water
On the ground splashes
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Ewigi Liebe 25 November 2008

what a wonderful words thanks for sharing

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Lynda Robson 16 June 2008

Lovely writing Nightingale, tender and romantic, Lynda xx

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... ... 15 June 2008

This is too beautiful to any poet's eyes. I love this poem. Thank you, my nightingale!

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Sarah Abdullah 14 June 2008

I live in the warmest corner of her heart I burn turn to ashes My ashes mix in the rose water On the ground splashes WOW This part is wonderful Thx alot for sharing ^_^

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Tsira Goge 14 June 2008

............10........ Sweet song, nightingale.

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Hela Jug 14 June 2008

heart inside a heart very nice :)

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M M 14 June 2008

A strong imagery for a magnificent testimony of love. A very beautiful poem! 10, of course!

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Rhiannon Scase 13 June 2008

Great write..A diamond in thre rough! 9

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Thad Wilk 13 June 2008

The red rose, the queen moves her lashes her scent fills the air Splendid read and i feel, as if i were there! ! ! *10*! Friend Thad

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Kesav Easwaran 13 June 2008

another poem on worshipful love...good worship.9

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