Wednesday, December 19, 2012

A Space Odyssey Comments

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Out around Alpha Centauri
Adrift and lost in space and time
Drifting slowly in the black of space
All I know is control ain't mine
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Noah Body
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Aimanu Begum 03 January 2013

The first three stanzas are quite symbolic, the fourth is a turning point in the poem.Reading the first three was a pleasure.

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Stan Petrovich 19 December 2012

Write on, ardronuat.

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