Thursday, August 23, 2007

A Space Beautiful Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sleep in a beautiful structure
After years of apartment life
My child shies from all flying insects
My wife says there's mice and there's bees
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Frank Bana
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Sarwar Chowdhury 27 August 2008

...wonderfull expression...I liked it........10

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Onelia Avelar 15 May 2008

A very cosy poem, with so relaxing, therapeutical effect! Nice calming style of writing. I like it.

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That sound like perfection. A lovely series of observations and a fine penning. (And I don't think you need to own a place to feel at home....) t x

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Ernestine Northover 23 August 2007

What a lovely delightful poem. the flow was great and a pleasure to read. Sounds s super place. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Francesca Johnson 23 August 2007

Sounds wonderful, Frank. Escapism for me, reality for you. Love, Fran xx

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