Friday, June 16, 2006

A Southern Turn Comments

Rating: 4.5

Walkin down the timeless sound, of how the west was won
Keepin’ fight to win what’s right for badge of job well done
With sheriff’s way on town astray, to save a mother’s son
The start of heart with northern part the south said witha gun
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Paul Moosberg
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Austen Bradford 10 July 2006

Well Im a southern girl And I like it, it's a good tribute to a great place and what it stands for

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BEAU GOLDEN 22 June 2006

I see nothing wrong with rhyming. this one has a definitive artistic bend. I started out writing only because the jazz of words kept leaking from my brain. Now i edit much more aggressively. The above is a nice piece of writing.

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Oscar Mireles 21 June 2006

Although rhyming is not my usual preference for poetry it seems to work here. I am at work so I don't have time to look at your other poems, but will try to stop back again...and comment

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