A Sour Day Comments

Seeking contact with Jacques Sprenkie Mateya. I have made music to one of his poems Contact me at th@julita.nu Tuomo Haapala

Your words have power to touch soul. Great poem. Thanks for sharing.

Fantastic poem that I like very much!

a good poem that needs a edit..ernegy is a typo, and the syntax needs some work, e.g. God came down to our rescue, words like Corpse need an article You write well, keep working!

Enemy is Government of a day, great line, depicting the brutality of some regimes. Good work, keep writing about subjects that inflame your passions.

Wow! What a deep, well crafted and thought provoking write that clearly shows your potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ WELCOME! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Keep giving the World more of your powerful works! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!