Tuesday, July 6, 2021

A Sound Kiss! Comments

Rating: 3.5

Showering Love & Affections,
To Near & Dear Ones,
And Future Prospects,
With a Consent Kiss;
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Naga Vamshidhar Ratakonda
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Luis A. Estable 06 July 2021

First, you don`t need all those capital letters. It makes the lines look odd. secondly, you need to develop much better what as sound kiss is without jumping in a illogical way from thought to thought in each stanza.

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Naga Vamshidhar Ratakonda

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Madanapalle, India
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