Tuesday, October 9, 2007

A Sound Across The Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I stood upon the brink of life
And looked into the murky depths
I knew my soul would soon be lost
If I took just one more faltering step
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Julie Dant
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Rory Hudson 06 April 2009

I like the gentle repetition of words and the rather wistful sound of this poem.

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Ron Flowers 13 August 2008

A very good poem, a pleasure to read. Ron

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Thad Wilk 09 October 2007

This is gooood Julie! ! Love it! ! ! (a 10) ! ! ! ! Thad

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 09 October 2007

What can i say about this beautiful poetry... Julie.. Just wonderful and a moving write, how many more of these beautiful works have you to share with us...10

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Corey Preston 09 October 2007

I really enjoyed this Poem it made me feel extremely better about myself. Thank you

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Julie Dant

Julie Dant

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