Thursday, March 16, 2017

A Soulful Plea Comments

Rating: 5.0

A tiny speck in the vast cosmic framework
Planet Earth, the most beautiful of God's handiwork
Is the only known habitation to all creation
Graciously bequeathed to generation after generation
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Robert Murray Smith 22 July 2018

There is no doubt we are waste-mongers leaving a legacy of pollution to other generations. Every poem of this type is important.+++10

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Robert Murray Smith 05 July 2018

A poignant write, Valsa. We who are on the way out hope that future generations will ameliorate the destruction. One positive is the Earth has resilience and she needs it.++10

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Loke Kok Yee 10 February 2018

Man's avarice knows no bounds This, you have clearly expound While nature watch and bewail Man continue to assail And Nature's course to derail Thanks Valsa.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 April 2017

Earth is now turned into a vast garbage can Rising pollution dimming her original glean To man and beast, it turns into a living hell In all attentive ears falls her resounding knell....................................Valsa Gerge is always great.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 02 April 2017

Yours indeed is a beautiful, meaningful, precious contribution to the poetry project - Planet Earth. Your writing is touchingly descriptive and the bard's deep anguish pours out through each word of the poem (10) .

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 March 2017

Is possible for human race! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 March 2017

All creatures, move slowly to their doom With rising carbon, soot and yellow fume Many species face imminent extinction And life moves fast to a critical junction... true dictum. Nice presentation on miserable conditions of earth at present.

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Susan Williams 20 March 2017

All creatures, move slowly to their doom With rising carbon, soot and yellow fume Many species face imminent extinction And life moves fast to a critical junction - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - If only those people in power the world over would take a good look at what the scientists are seeing, measuring, predicting we might still have time to save our planet Earth... but the time is fast approaching that we cannot turn the ravages around. Well said, Valsa. A soulful plea, indeed.

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Muhammad Ali 18 March 2017

yes.. a serious most matter. man isn't destroying earth but humanity. man is nothing without earth.

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Savita Tyagi 16 March 2017

Beautiful poem with poignant message. I read it earlier on forum. These meaningful poetry projects is something we all can be proud of. Thanks to Dr Babrizio Frosini.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 16 March 2017

It is a nice persuasive poem with rhyme scheme.

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Nosheen Irfan 16 March 2017

A wonderful piece of writing. I'm glad to find it's part of an anthology. A powerful plea to the mankind to wake up before it's too late. What humans have been doing to earth demands a serious action to revert it. We have been too reckless. It's time to make amends. A beautiful n meaningful write. A10.

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