Saturday, August 8, 2009

A Soul With No Voice Trying To Speak Comments

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I am screaming harder than ever
in a place no one listens
hidding my face from the world
were no one can see how much I cry.
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Ana Z. M.
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Ted M 22 August 2009

You express your feelings very well, your words flow so well throughout in a lovely artistic way the way only you know how. Great write............

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Marcella D 14 August 2009

very creative of you to make such a lovely poem you have

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C. P. Sharma 11 August 2009

Ana, this world is a museum of mute statues with flesh and blood. No one speaks but you, no one loves but you and no one cries but you. The soul speaks, but we don't listen because we expect that the statue will speak. You are poetic and your poetry is expressive. It's beautiful and sincere expression of your feelings. If you have time, please read my love poems. I would like to know your views about them. I know you are too young but your experience seems to have matured you. CP

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