Saturday, March 28, 2009

A Soul To The Heavens Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I go bare foot across the beach,
I see a grain of sand.
A man comes forth as if to teach,
And quickly grabs my hand.
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That Boy
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Ernestine Northover 17 June 2009

A very good write indeed. A lovely storyline and the flow was excellent. Again a check on spelling, but otherwise a pleasure to read. Loe Ernestine XXX

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Wojja Fink 14 April 2009

Here is a young gifted poet in the making....bravo....John.

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Emma Jane Rae 09 April 2009

OH MY GOD! ! ! your poem is amazing! you should be so proud of yourself for writing such a beautiful poem,10++++ well done!

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Anthony Foster 09 April 2009

Where did all that come from. Its about comunication which you have got

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Amber Vasquez 08 April 2009

Wow this is such a wonderful poem! Vary good read!

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