As I go bare foot across the beach,
I see a grain of sand.
A man comes forth as if to teach,
And quickly grabs my hand.
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OH MY GOD! ! ! your poem is amazing! you should be so proud of yourself for writing such a beautiful poem,10++++ well done!
Where did all that come from. Its about comunication which you have got
A very good write indeed. A lovely storyline and the flow was excellent. Again a check on spelling, but otherwise a pleasure to read. Loe Ernestine XXX