For the first time I feel
That the sadness I have no doctor can heel
Though it should have been a happy day
But all the happiness has faded away
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Well articulated train of thoughts, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A beautiful love poem with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing.
Black and white can never be mixed? ...yes it can and they called Gray :) , there's no way we need to find a reason to feel down, because what we need is the reason how to get rise up....This poem feels so strong in emotions, so hard and so nice at same time, you did a very good job Ghina, keep writing! ! _Unwritten Soul
Crying clouds filled this vast blue sky Tried reaching them, but they were so high Your love was shining my heart so bright Your love didn't leave me depressed in this dark night bring positive notes into life. smile and the world will smile with you. go to little children. they teach us a lot to smile, to laugh and make this world a wonderful place for you and for all the others. thank u dear poetess for this fine poem.. tony