Saturday, July 6, 2013

A Soul’s Cry Comments

Rating: 5.0

Never was I in such dismay
A lost soul
Who knows not the body he’s in
Wandering far and wide
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Jahan Zeb
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Yasmin Khan 19 October 2013

a lost soul in search of its destination, a cry from the heart!

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Shahzia Batool 07 July 2013

tears are the ink here...a complete poem without any odors and essences artificial! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 06 July 2013

Heartfelt....i do cry sometimes, and left me better..i am not weak, well if i am weak i am okay with it..because i am a human with feelings and emotion...i will share lot in every drop of my tears. You have started it and only you can ended it...and pain it is real but do we ready for next thing..Oh God lead us somewhere you think it best_Soul

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Thungem Lam 06 July 2013

Waoh! So amazed. I enjoy so much in reading your poem, it is wonderful. Read my poem and comment me.

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