# # A Soul - Part Two Comments

A lovely poem told from the perspective of a child's soul...pleasing images, too. this is a 10 again, my votes are not registering.

the second part describes well, how the feelings are turned agony without share the dad's affection...touching lines

an infants soul that knows so much.i do think that infants and children know a lot but cant express for only the lack of vocabulary.well done sam.

Flowing with feelings that bring words to life. Well done my friend.

A good mix up of emotions and reality. CP

Very soul-ful... can feel the connection os souls here..

Very touching & very nice..10

The story of the soul goes on separating the other soul in a different way.

‘There can be bad father but never bad mother’ as adage says…it reflects that…Mother Magnanimization is deeply rooted in Indian psychic soil… Ms. Nivedita Ten+ UK

reminds me of 'veral veli verkotpalavin saara naada selviyai yaagumadi...' from Agam.......there its lovers, here a couple, but the ambiance is the same.....Its so beautiful

very nice... touching....a mirror of him in you great ideas here 10+++ Lovelots, Snow

vivid imagination and live images painted here. a touch of reality makes this poem stand up and talk to the reader....really nice one

Very touching...a sample piece of many couples in real life...a dolorous poem

Samanyan, here you have touched on several things- indifference, sublimation by mothers, neglected childhood, longing to belong- very touching and well composed. Mamta

sad............. sandhya

Poignant but with a plethora of exotic expressions of emotions. However the soul does not need someone, it is everything

How very sad. Almost as if each soul is in solitary confinement. Memorable, Sam, to say the least. Warm regards, Sandra

Sad situation no love

I can capture your feelings well. This episode could be a specimen. Millions of children around us can have the same experience because of the same kind of dad they have. This poem gives such a wider scope for us to reflect on the issue.

the soul will always feel the emotions as well as the thoughts of wht is around it, as did it feel its mother. gr8t write a ten