# # A Soul - Part Three Comments

part 3... while reading it seems a prose.in my opinion, the thread can be more shapen as a prosody..any how it gives pleasant look...nice

a child is a part of us.not a soul is hard-hearted enough to be softened by just a glimpse of his child.

‘…this intoxication was new to him…’ Climaxing and turning point…well addressed poetically… Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK

Innate love for self perpetuation is the driving force in life. CP

Samanyan, yes, babies can transform lives and people in ways totally unexplained. isn't that's why they tell a couple having trouble to make a baby in the hope it will save the marriage. a very tender write. i totally agree with what Nikunj has said. was away for a week.thus the delay in reading this heart touching poem. Mamta

Ur poem is very close to reality im inspired by ur poem, it really touched my heart..10+

Well it certainly sounds as if it were a redeeming experience for someone in need! Also you needed your dad and it was fitting he needed you too.

a beautiful ending......well done....10

The reunion of a drunkard soul is seen here.

Portrays a soft touch of redemption in a new life. [ children are a gift of GOD ]

new intoxication.....nice term. Again this poem is very close to reality. images of a hospital, a child sleeping in the cradle...home coming etc. simple, sweet and stimulating....

You're lucky to be smiled at by your father...having learnt how a smile heals the wounded heart....you must throw it at your mother and your wife and kids as well...'keep smiling 'should be the motto in everyone's life isn't it...lovely write

Obviously.......i was inspired by your profound poem............it penetrated my own soul..........

wow what a heartfelt poetic story here Sam...it made me cry...a father's love, a child's magic to soften and renew one's soul.........well done! ! !

The lights just came on! A beautiful conclusion to a very compelling life story.10/10. Kind regards, Sandra

the pride of a new found dad. beautiful! a ten

You wove the parts together very well Sam and made the happy ending a pleasure for the reader.... a good three parter and top marks from Fay.

you unwind well the feelings inside you...thanks...10

not to late to renew...and be back to own self again great theme here.... interesting...touching... an angel came and change him... really a very significant write... 10+++ Lovelots, Maia

Very Nice to read soul no.3 came through and gave baby and mom a new lease on life. I enjoyed all three of your soul poems, you did a terrific job, and congrats on dad coming around. How about read Litttle Boy of Mine Your friend Lynn