As i flew through
the corridors into that room
the woman screaming there
my mother to become
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in the first part we can see the mother's joy, when she is giving her baby.it's very comforting knowing that others are in the same boat as her.
Oh I liked it very much and i Have my valid reason for it too.. I had raised a question in my write ' A question' n here i think u gave me a fairly satisfactory answer.. :)
Beautiful poem. Well penned This subject is very rarely written here. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me
Nice poeming of the spirit of journey from Womanhood to Motherhood… the ultimate joy in hearing ‘…'so you are me'…’ Ms. Nivedita Ten+ UK
Punarapi jananam, punarapi maranam......yet the body seems so dear!
Sam, your pen has the miraculous power of turning whatever it touches upon into gold. CP
A very original write Samanyan on a subject that hardly finds a place in poetry...10
our souls are bigger than we could ever hope to be and the love in it is stronger than any thing this world could imagine. very well put sam! a ten
You where born pure Sam and vivid account quite unique and original piece a beaut+++++10 regards
Very interesting.I dreamt about my birth and I remember it vividly.
Very interesting verbage and new expression of the beginning of the soul. Very smart write. A 10 on soul no.1. Read My Special Child. Your friend Lynn
Sam, i love this poem of a vision of a woman, mother and child[you]. You did a great job! a 10 for sure