Saturday, November 21, 2009

# A Soul - Part One Comments

Rating: 5.0

As i flew through
the corridors into that room
the woman screaming there
my mother to become
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Almedia Knight-Oliver 07 January 2010

Sam, i love this poem of a vision of a woman, mother and child[you]. You did a great job! a 10 for sure

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 31 December 2009

in the first part we can see the mother's joy, when she is giving her baby.it's very comforting knowing that others are in the same boat as her.

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Deepti Agarwal 23 December 2009

Oh I liked it very much and i Have my valid reason for it too.. I had raised a question in my write ' A question' n here i think u gave me a fairly satisfactory answer.. :)

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 20 December 2009

Beautiful poem, ths for sharing..! 10

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Ravi Sathasivam 15 December 2009

Beautiful poem. Well penned This subject is very rarely written here. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

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Rajaram Ramachandran 15 December 2009

Thus a soul is born through the mother.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 December 2009

Nice poeming of the spirit of journey from Womanhood to Motherhood… the ultimate joy in hearing ‘…'so you are me'…’ Ms. Nivedita Ten+ UK

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 15 December 2009

Punarapi jananam, punarapi maranam......yet the body seems so dear!

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 15 December 2009

a different write indeed.

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Indira Renganathan 14 December 2009

Highly superb on birth of a child...congrats

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C. P. Sharma 11 December 2009

Sam, your pen has the miraculous power of turning whatever it touches upon into gold. CP

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Vandavasu Vittal 07 December 2009

Elegantly pictured how the soul wears it's clothes.

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Joseph Poewhit 07 December 2009

Intimate piece of writing

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Sandra Martyres 05 December 2009

A very original write Samanyan on a subject that hardly finds a place in poetry...10

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Louis Rams 05 December 2009

our souls are bigger than we could ever hope to be and the love in it is stronger than any thing this world could imagine. very well put sam! a ten

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Ken E Hall 04 December 2009

You where born pure Sam and vivid account quite unique and original piece a beaut+++++10 regards

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Tsira Goge 04 December 2009

samanyan, It's Beautifully and deeply human...10.... Tsira

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Sally Plumb Plumb 04 December 2009

Very interesting.I dreamt about my birth and I remember it vividly.

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Vijay Menon 03 December 2009

beautiful poem on a subject rarely written fine

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Lynn Glover 03 December 2009

Very interesting verbage and new expression of the beginning of the soul. Very smart write. A 10 on soul no.1. Read My Special Child. Your friend Lynn

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