# # A Soul - Part Four [conclusion] Comments

a soul send to the earth to achieve an important task.a soul or an angel send by god.............

A beautiful teen age conception of the soul. Poetic too. CP

Samanyan, i shall have to read all the four again, but here I feel God's ways have always been mysterious. if this be biographical, perhaps your perception has changed as you are a father now. howerver, it brings out your sensitivity and dexterity at portraying life so poignantly. regards Mamta

lovely.... something which touches the heart with warmth... :)

This story is darkly interesting.

A baby on the cradle cannot know or remember all these things and express as you have done in poetry! It is an imaginary sentiment of yours! Realism no poet can forget in poetic expression as we are living in the modern world of fast technology and scientific inventions everyday!

All the 4poems are penned beautifully, excellent work...well done10+

A well write indeed.By the way, the face could be very deceiving.

Samanyan, Nice work indeed. Rgds Nooruddeen

sam! all four poems have done honor to the soul. and the new birth it creates between the parents is just as beautiful for it is done by GODS hand. thank you so much for these 4 beautiful poems. your soul truly shows in it.

A fitting conclusion to your teenage memories. for me it is only the body that dies but the soul lives on to be of use in another form. Life is energy! Regards Bob

the poem settled in my heart. a fantastic tale. be the father your kids would be proud of.

felt like telling them i will never ever go excellent reflective poem 10++++++++++

A tragic end to your saga moving piece all way thru keeping the readers attention all the way...grea work here+++++10 regards

It is the divine play and the creation's destiny that the countdown starts on the day of birth itself...sooner or longer the end is mysteriously unknown...in your poem it is tragiclly at the earliest before the babe begins to live...you have really painted your words with pathos..excellent and a 10 from me

Well expressed of an Indian family cluster...nice

a composition truly remarkable....a series which ended in a very good conclusion...well done! ! ! 10+++++++

Interesting poem a touching one....written remarkably.....10

You have made tragedy seem beautiful in this powerful conclusion. Very touching indeed. 10/10. Warm regards, Sandra

read all four...well rendered...a soul of a new born that has spread joy and hope to his estranged parents...sad it ended thus.