# # A Soul Does - Senryu Comments

A wonderful piece for its depth of contents. Actually, best compositions are born when our mind is completely lost in the deep, indwelling spirit. This poem reflects that you too had such an experience. Thanks.

Music, breezes and flowers weave through these Senryu. I love them both! 10 Karin Anderson

deep words...witness my soul...to move on...such a dialogue...listen to heart and wonder my soul that all are just a beginning of life....you have a line of a poet that make the reader to love of what is life...thank you and God Speed....a 10 +

very touching words regards sandhya

This is lovely Sam, music to soothe the soul, 10 Lynda xx

goodness and badness...but badness can stroke and goodness can be embedded in narcissism, selfishness and sensuality.......well written poem..10+++ from me

wow this is short, sweet, musiccal, beautiful piece indeed! ! ! liked this one! ! ! with love shan

Simply lovely, a perfume of love.

I'm listening to the sound of your poetry as your words speak like music, Sam.: -)

the veena speaks very loud, yet gives a gentle sound. gr88t write a ten

Nice poetic description Sam...well penned! 10

Within the fragrance...we find this freshness...your words my brother.....stunning 10+++

a soothing effects for the soul...nice theme...10

Nice pieces Samanyan.....thanks for the translation

soul inhales fragrance beautifully written