Saturday, October 18, 2008

A Soul Comments

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seek not for the pounding of the heart
but pursue the caress of the gathering
if it is not your true self,
then where is the wanting soul?
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M Rene Riel
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Afzal Shauq 17 August 2009

sure things should come up from the soul, not heart..because the heart follows brain most of times and brain always inspires from things which are seen good to eyes.. your idea and logic in this poem is great and you expressed it well and the poem is much thoughful and meaningful also..liekd it very much and inspiring one..well done..10/10

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Marcella D 20 July 2009

this is really nice poem you have here

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M Rene Riel

M Rene Riel

Plattsburgh New York USA
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