A Sorry Tale Of-The Flight Of A Needle-Phobic Comments

The humorous Laurie is every bit as entertaining as the romantic Laurie. I would not mind having the whole collection, truly..(smile)

Haha! A sharp piece of wit. Remember, Jesus says to turn the other cheek.. -chuck

What more can I say in the face of such witty and wily poetic craft except well done-and hard luck!

This is an unexpected change of tone and, for me, illumines the futility of the attempted flight and the reality of the unescapable. my face squashed deep in mattress, As one sat, upon me 'ead, The blunt javelin was lofted, then stabbed into a cheek, with face immersed in mattress,

Humorous to us non needle phobics. my pet phobia is enemas

Hahaha! Another delightful poem. You have a wonderful sense of humour. Irene

I get the point nice work 10

Absolutely my kind of write - witty, to the point, and a ring of truth for most of us.

This is terrific, really loved your flow of rhymes, with a great story!

A lighthearted piece of self deprecation delivered in a jolly rhythm and with a sharply pointed wit. This silly poem contains more than an ounce of truth, I'm sure. Great fun. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Another good one. So refreshing from the love mush found on this site. Adeline

you scaredy cat, you... i should know.. i'm one too! =: O

very well written, well done!

A wonderful tale of needilitis lol, made me laugh, it is quite common to be afraid of needles, great write Laurie, 10 Lynda xx

I love it! Absolutely and completely. Who wouldn't? The rhyme lets it romp along and I did with you, but I didn't slip like you. That would be foolish as I wouldn't want to be captive of such Tomfoolery. This had made my day! Absolutely wonderful work and more of it please! Karin Anderson

OMG As humerous as this Poem is....... Myself being a Needle Phobic Knows it is not at all a laughing matter. But one of unbelievable fear. I actually have nightmares about it now and then. When I had My First child I had a Nurse Like Hattie Jaques from the Carry on Films literally hold me down so they could inser a Drip into my arm Bloody Nightmare. In my dreams though they dont get me LOL

I Love It! ! ! It is just the right meter and told with suspense and rhyme and it is just perfect! I can see it right now. I had to laugh. thanks for trying your hand at humor. It is great! ! Susan

This is so funny :) and i do sympathize as i am a needlephobic. Even as a child the nurses knew to sit me down before a shot as i would faint lol. Well done and your comedic talent shone thru. Who'd 'ave thunk it? lol

Oh this so made me laugh Laurie...wonderful write...thanks...10+++